10-21-01 @ 6:34 pm EDT

I've tentatively finished the rough draft of "Random Scene 3"--but it doesn't tell all the info I wanted to tell! It leaves so much out. It pretty much ends right after Brooks admits what happened to him, and Kristeva (POV character) mentally compares what happened to him with what he (K.) went through. No more details! Am I sick for wanting to put in more details?? Maybe it's because I can't post the actual scene, so I want to tell what happened in another, tamer manner. Well, I didn't want it to end there, but for some reason it just...DID. To tack more on would be to force it. Hummmmmmm. /:(

I'm wondering if I'll have to write a Random Scene 4 just to finish up Random Scene 3!!

The link later on when it's all fixed up...man this is annoying! Poor Brooks, can't even give him a decent scene without dragging him through it.