10-23-02 @ 1:02 pm EDT

I just discovered a HUGE plot problem concerning Manitou Island and its sequel. I can't believe I actually overlooked it! Basically, I forgot that Lily Flower is married...to White Coyote! (You can't really tell it from the story now, can you?) In the sequel she's supposed to still be living with her father and White Deer, and involved with...someone who is definitely NOT White Coyote! Oh dear. How dumb of me.

So I'll have to fix this. Either I made a mistake and she's NOT married to him, or she'll have to "divorce" him before the sequel and move back in with her dad. (Well, I've read that as long as they haven't had any kids, that's her right!)

GAH I feel dumb.